Titus Oates say to the other men that they should leave him in his sleeping-bag. But they men would not, and they took him with them on a afternoon march. When it became night they could see, that it was over for him.
Titus Oates' last thoughts were of his mother. Scoot see Oates as a very brave and gentle man.
"I take this opportunity of saying that we have stuck to our sick companions to the last". It was important for Scott that other know that is was Oates own choice, and that Scoot and the rest of the company were there to the last.
Du kan ikke bruge "opportunity" som du gør her (til sidst). Få lige gruppen til at kigge på det, hvis du ikke selv kan se, hvad der er galt.
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